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	<description>Life in the slow lane</description>
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		<title>Comment on Day 11: Bored now by Hawthorn</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hawthorn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Nov 2009 07:33:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I don&#039;t know, and I tried to find it online, but the urban dictionary was useless. However, I do like it, and applaud you for using it. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t know, and I tried to find it online, but the urban dictionary was useless. However, I do like it, and applaud you for using it. <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Day 11: Bored now by steph</title>
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		<dc:creator>steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Nov 2009 02:50:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yes, as I said in the last comment. Good! I&#039;m glad you&#039;re continuing. God, I admire you. I would never even attempt such a challenge. I&#039;m far too chicken-shit. (Wherever did that term come from? What the hell does it actually mean? No chicken I&#039;ve ever seen has actually been afraid but rather violent in defending itself. And how did the &quot;shit&quot; get tacked on there??)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, as I said in the last comment. Good! I&#8217;m glad you&#8217;re continuing. God, I admire you. I would never even attempt such a challenge. I&#8217;m far too chicken-shit. (Wherever did that term come from? What the hell does it actually mean? No chicken I&#8217;ve ever seen has actually been afraid but rather violent in defending itself. And how did the &#8220;shit&#8221; get tacked on there??)</p>
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		<title>Comment on Day 10: The loneliness of the long-distance writer by steph</title>
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		<dc:creator>steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Nov 2009 02:47:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;I’m currently working on an autobiog by a dyslexic depressive with a compulsive eating disorder.&quot; Haha! Seriously? Oh man, I do not envy you. (Sorry for the lack of empathy in that sentence. I am sorry for you. I just turned down a memoir because I can&#039;t help but dislike people who think their lives are bookworthy. Memoirs really turn me off...unless they&#039;re by Elizabeth Gilbert.)

I would LOVE to read whatever you&#039;ve written. Keep going, just keep writing. You can always fix it afterward. Try not to let the editor in you interfere; just churn it out for now!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;I’m currently working on an autobiog by a dyslexic depressive with a compulsive eating disorder.&#8221; Haha! Seriously? Oh man, I do not envy you. (Sorry for the lack of empathy in that sentence. I am sorry for you. I just turned down a memoir because I can&#8217;t help but dislike people who think their lives are bookworthy. Memoirs really turn me off&#8230;unless they&#8217;re by Elizabeth Gilbert.)</p>
<p>I would LOVE to read whatever you&#8217;ve written. Keep going, just keep writing. You can always fix it afterward. Try not to let the editor in you interfere; just churn it out for now!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Day 10: The loneliness of the long-distance writer by Hawthorn</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hawthorn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Nov 2009 23:30:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hoorah for mushy peas! MrH, being a soft southern type, had never had them until he took up with a hardy northern lass and was served them with his chips. He learned fast.

Great news about the fantasy author! Wish I had one like that - I&#039;m currently working on an autobiog by a dyslexic depressive with a compulsive eating disorder. Light reading it is not...

And no - my NaNo novel is neither HP nor WoT; probably more like a rather more rubbish David Eddings. I thought his books were fantastic when I was about fourteen; now I realise they&#039;re a bit trite and actually rather poorly written. I might send my novel to you to read if I ever get past the point where I can read it myself without wincing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hoorah for mushy peas! MrH, being a soft southern type, had never had them until he took up with a hardy northern lass and was served them with his chips. He learned fast.</p>
<p>Great news about the fantasy author! Wish I had one like that &#8211; I&#8217;m currently working on an autobiog by a dyslexic depressive with a compulsive eating disorder. Light reading it is not&#8230;</p>
<p>And no &#8211; my NaNo novel is neither HP nor WoT; probably more like a rather more rubbish David Eddings. I thought his books were fantastic when I was about fourteen; now I realise they&#8217;re a bit trite and actually rather poorly written. I might send my novel to you to read if I ever get past the point where I can read it myself without wincing.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Day 10: The loneliness of the long-distance writer by steph</title>
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		<dc:creator>steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Nov 2009 03:29:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I can&#039;t help it: every time I read you I end up laughing. It&#039;s just the way you say everything. You describing Mr. H and his writing killed me. 

ARE you writing the next HP/WoT/etc.?? When can I read? And how the blazes are you doing this while editing? 

Got a new client today, and a FANTASY author at that! Mind you, she hasn&#039;t finished the novel by a long shot, but she wants me alongside for the entire process. Usually these types scare me off and I decline, saying I only work on finished stuff, but she and I hit it off. And this is after rejecting three previous. Not that I can afford to, but I just for some reason couldn&#039;t make myself do the others. Something about them. And I couldn&#039;t get it together in general, until today. 

So I&#039;ll start by reading her first few pages and giving her a sample edit and then we&#039;ll work on this piecemeal, which is actually okay for me right now since I&#039;m at the clinic, and go until she&#039;s done and then we&#039;ll draw up a query letter and so on. I&#039;m quite excited, to be honest, not least because she&#039;s a D&amp;D geek and is playing WoW right now. I thought of you when she told me that. We might even end up playing Diablo III when it comes out, online. God. 

Anyway. In a week I&#039;ll be starting a book on WWI soldiers or summat (almost 400 pages!! Yes, I&#039;m lacking in good judgment), and when I&#039;m finished that I should have enough for another ticket to England. I&#039;m hoping to open an account so I can squirrel away some freelance money for next year&#039;s visit...

PS. On Sunday I went to visit my Yorkshire friend (who actually hasn&#039;t lived there in something like 30 years but her accent is as strong as ever) and she made me Yorkshire pudding and mushy peas—like, *real* mushy peas, the Bachelor&#039;s kind that you soak for two hours and then cook till mushy. She says no one she knows likes them. I loved them!! Colin thought they were gross. 

PS. http://www.worldwidewords.org/qa/qa-sha2.htm</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can&#8217;t help it: every time I read you I end up laughing. It&#8217;s just the way you say everything. You describing Mr. H and his writing killed me. </p>
<p>ARE you writing the next HP/WoT/etc.?? When can I read? And how the blazes are you doing this while editing? </p>
<p>Got a new client today, and a FANTASY author at that! Mind you, she hasn&#8217;t finished the novel by a long shot, but she wants me alongside for the entire process. Usually these types scare me off and I decline, saying I only work on finished stuff, but she and I hit it off. And this is after rejecting three previous. Not that I can afford to, but I just for some reason couldn&#8217;t make myself do the others. Something about them. And I couldn&#8217;t get it together in general, until today. </p>
<p>So I&#8217;ll start by reading her first few pages and giving her a sample edit and then we&#8217;ll work on this piecemeal, which is actually okay for me right now since I&#8217;m at the clinic, and go until she&#8217;s done and then we&#8217;ll draw up a query letter and so on. I&#8217;m quite excited, to be honest, not least because she&#8217;s a D&amp;D geek and is playing WoW right now. I thought of you when she told me that. We might even end up playing Diablo III when it comes out, online. God. </p>
<p>Anyway. In a week I&#8217;ll be starting a book on WWI soldiers or summat (almost 400 pages!! Yes, I&#8217;m lacking in good judgment), and when I&#8217;m finished that I should have enough for another ticket to England. I&#8217;m hoping to open an account so I can squirrel away some freelance money for next year&#8217;s visit&#8230;</p>
<p>PS. On Sunday I went to visit my Yorkshire friend (who actually hasn&#8217;t lived there in something like 30 years but her accent is as strong as ever) and she made me Yorkshire pudding and mushy peas—like, *real* mushy peas, the Bachelor&#8217;s kind that you soak for two hours and then cook till mushy. She says no one she knows likes them. I loved them!! Colin thought they were gross. </p>
<p>PS. <a href="http://www.worldwidewords.org/qa/qa-sha2.htm" rel="nofollow">http://www.worldwidewords.org/qa/qa-sha2.htm</a></p>
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		<title>Comment on Progress report: Day 4 by steph</title>
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		<dc:creator>steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 02:45:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My good command of English is apparently slipping. Lately I&#039;ve sounded like a half-wit. Sorry.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My good command of English is apparently slipping. Lately I&#8217;ve sounded like a half-wit. Sorry.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Progress report: Day 4 by steph</title>
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		<dc:creator>steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 02:43:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow. I&#039;m feeling really jealous of you. First off, you&#039;re writing. Like, writing FICTION. And you&#039;re doing it a lot. Second, you sound organized and planned and...with ideas. 

I am so ungrounded right now I don&#039;t know which way is up. My greatest accomplishment lately was finding a few old Nancy Drew books I didn&#039;t have to add to my collection. This week I&#039;ll have worked over full-time at the clinic thanks to the high volume of paranoids regarding the blasted (which is not the word I want to use) swine flu, and yes, I&#039;ll call it swine flu and not worry about whether or not that makes people freak out and not want to eat pork even though you don&#039;t get it from eating pork. If they don&#039;t get afflicted with the flu, they&#039;ll find me to contend with otherwise. GRR. 

On the other hand, although I resent all the time it&#039;s taking up and I&#039;m especially resentful of even having to work in the first place (the holiday really spoiled me!), these extra hours are making up for the fact that I didn&#039;t get paid while in England. 

I&#039;m off to deal with some editing clients myself. I&#039;ve been putting them off and I still want to. Suddenly I feel like a huge fraud. I have no idea how to do a proper query letter and manuscript critique. At least, that&#039;s how I feel. Nor do I want to. Hopefully the client doesn&#039;t end up here and read this comment.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow. I&#8217;m feeling really jealous of you. First off, you&#8217;re writing. Like, writing FICTION. And you&#8217;re doing it a lot. Second, you sound organized and planned and&#8230;with ideas. </p>
<p>I am so ungrounded right now I don&#8217;t know which way is up. My greatest accomplishment lately was finding a few old Nancy Drew books I didn&#8217;t have to add to my collection. This week I&#8217;ll have worked over full-time at the clinic thanks to the high volume of paranoids regarding the blasted (which is not the word I want to use) swine flu, and yes, I&#8217;ll call it swine flu and not worry about whether or not that makes people freak out and not want to eat pork even though you don&#8217;t get it from eating pork. If they don&#8217;t get afflicted with the flu, they&#8217;ll find me to contend with otherwise. GRR. </p>
<p>On the other hand, although I resent all the time it&#8217;s taking up and I&#8217;m especially resentful of even having to work in the first place (the holiday really spoiled me!), these extra hours are making up for the fact that I didn&#8217;t get paid while in England. </p>
<p>I&#8217;m off to deal with some editing clients myself. I&#8217;ve been putting them off and I still want to. Suddenly I feel like a huge fraud. I have no idea how to do a proper query letter and manuscript critique. At least, that&#8217;s how I feel. Nor do I want to. Hopefully the client doesn&#8217;t end up here and read this comment.</p>
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		<title>Comment on On writing by steph</title>
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		<dc:creator>steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Nov 2009 04:52:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>PS. I wish you *would* post here more often. I miss it when you don&#039;t.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>PS. I wish you *would* post here more often. I miss it when you don&#8217;t.</p>
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		<title>Comment on On writing by steph</title>
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		<dc:creator>steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Nov 2009 04:52:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You are brave. I&#039;d never in a million years sign up for it. (But then I&#039;d go and write 50,000 words in a single blog post, wouldn&#039;t I? Windbag that I am...and then I wonder why I don&#039;t have time for walking and reading and why I end up in bed far too late.)

So...how&#039;s it going? And please, please, give me a hint about the story?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You are brave. I&#8217;d never in a million years sign up for it. (But then I&#8217;d go and write 50,000 words in a single blog post, wouldn&#8217;t I? Windbag that I am&#8230;and then I wonder why I don&#8217;t have time for walking and reading and why I end up in bed far too late.)</p>
<p>So&#8230;how&#8217;s it going? And please, please, give me a hint about the story?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Sick and tired by Hawthorn</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hawthorn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 29 Sep 2009 15:43:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>On the mend, thanks, although this cold is hanging around much longer than is polite. I still have a sore throat and keep going slightly dizzy - I like to think I&#039;m in the &#039;pale and wan&#039; phase, but everyone else thinks I&#039;m just being a bit of a weed.
Got your email, thanks - will reply in the next day or two, maybe even with my &#039;real&#039; email address (rather than the one I hide behind. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>On the mend, thanks, although this cold is hanging around much longer than is polite. I still have a sore throat and keep going slightly dizzy &#8211; I like to think I&#8217;m in the &#8216;pale and wan&#8217; phase, but everyone else thinks I&#8217;m just being a bit of a weed.<br />
Got your email, thanks &#8211; will reply in the next day or two, maybe even with my &#8216;real&#8217; email address (rather than the one I hide behind. <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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